With all due deference, Mr. Sze, your poem’s too long. Try this instead:
The path, silent
Waking, may light
Sharper now, huh?
Photo by Rick Stachura. “Poetry in Motion” as seen on the N Train. March 16, 2020.
With all due deference, Mr. Sze, your poem’s too long. Try this instead:
The path, silent
Waking, may light
Sharper now, huh?
Photo by Rick Stachura. “Poetry in Motion” as seen on the N Train. March 16, 2020.